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She, of Flawed Perfection

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In her heart is room for you within each beat -
She dreams of your accomplishment with every word;
Hear her cry, "Do not give voice to your defeat!"

She'll judge not if your home's a castle or the street;
Your writing's a utensil, and her soul is stirred!
In her heart is room for you within each beat.

Each new member to her group, she's thrilled to greet!
As she reads, her heart does sing just like a bird!
Hear her cry, "Do not give voice to your defeat!"

Her excitement is contageous - "This group is neat!"
The buzz is loud as many ask, "Hey, have you heard?"
In her heart is room for you within each beat.

As a writer, if you struggle to feel complete,
And you fret that what you've written sounds absurd,
Hear her cry, "Do not give voice to your defeat!"

She'll tell you - if your words seem cold - "Turn up the heat!"
She counsels when you can't find words - "don't be deterred!"
In her heart is room for you within each beat -
Hear her cry, "Do not give voice to your defeat!"
This Villanelle poem is written to TheFlawedOne in appreciation of her excitement! about her new literature group, FlawedLiterature :)

She also loves the Villanelle form, and if you wish to write one to her, please visit the group!
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All writers are welcome, from beginner on up - poets and story writers both! See you there!
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This one made me smile. :D What a lovely tribute! You've quite the knack for writing dedicatory pieces for people.


(It makes me want to get to know the amazing person who sparked the inspiration for this poem.)